Editorials

This is something that i have been working on recently, I took an article from the I newspaper on the possibility of trains in london becoming more cramped and expensive in the future. I started out with the first idea that came to mind, which was people being crammed into trains like Sardines. So at first i drew them as Sardines.
After talking with my tutor, we decided to have a look down the root of changing the Sardines into people who look fish like.
Throughout this illustration process i have found the later stage of drawing people like fish the most challenging, i also struggled with making the image look cramped and busy aswell as making the image flow and communicate the idea across easily.
Due to this fact i did a turn around and i am now using my original ida as it is simple, gets the idea across straight away and it flows the only problem is that it doesnt really look like a train enough.